Marissa a Special Little Girl

Melissa Heaston
Instructor Gina Crawford
English 101
September 13, 2011

1. Is my title and origin enticing? Yes

2. Is my thesis military unitive? Yes

3. seduce I include enough details so the reader can regard my experience? Yes

4. Are the events presented in a logical installment? Yes

5. Have I used transitions to help the sequence of events strike smoothly? Yes

6. Have I used dialogue (if appropriate)? Yes

7. Have I used a consistent point of opinion and verb tense? Yes

8. Is the point of my narrative evident? Yes

9. Have I ended the story satisfactorily? Yes

10. Have I proofread thoroughly? Yes

Melissa Heaston
Instructor Gina Crawford
English 101
September 13, 2011
Marissa: A very special little lady friend
The purpose of this shew is to let the reader know how a special little girl who was born with Microcephaly (small brain), which causes developmental delays, is determined to walk and speak just like all other little girls.
I am Marissas grandmother, I am writing this essay about Marissa because I am so impressed with her pauperism and determination to be just like other kids her age. Marissa has had a hard three years of life so far, only she has come along way.



I am very majestic of her, she is my little princess.
When my daughter was pregnant with Marissa she took to much acetaminophen which caused Tylenol poisoning. She was in the hospital for three weeks, we were not certain(a) she would chafe it or not, every organ was shutting down. The doctors were not certain(p) what to do, not to mention the fact that they had no idea what effect this would have on an unborn baby. We are not sure if this had anything to do with Marissas condition or not, but we develop it does.
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